Drabble: Dawning

[lili_pad]

Title: Dawning
Author: Lilith (lilithilien)
Fandom & Characters: Alles Was Zählt, Roman/Deniz
Word Count: 100 words
Rating: Gen
Disclaimer: I own absolutely nothing.
A/N: Written in hopes of brightening aldiara's day. She wanted "Roman watches Deniz sleeping"...I hope this fits the bill!


Morning came early, its insistent fingers slipping through the curtains and illuminating Roman's face. Unwilling eyes glared at the unwelcome light, but softened at the sight of the man beside him. Deniz lay on his stomach just as they'd made love the night before. A red sheet threaded through his legs like Christmas ribbon, but his back was bare, rising and falling as he dreamed.

"What do you dream?" Roman whispered quietly, his fingertips grazing Deniz' chin, feather-light. There was no answer, but there were no questions either. No doubts, no dissent, only contentment as he slumbered in Roman's bed.

Comments

[aldiara.livejournal.com (from insanejournal.com)]

EEEEEEEE, it is beauteous!!! I love it! Christmas ribbon! Pretty light! Gorgeous scene! Boys! Thank you so much :D :D :D *HUGS*

[lilithilien.insanejournal.com]

And don't forget bottom!Deniz, just for you. *eg* Yay! I'm so glad you liked it!!

[aldiara.livejournal.com (from insanejournal.com)]

Bottom!Deniz is much, much appreciated also :D

(now, how long can I sit here and be hypnotised by Roman's knee coming up in your icon? ...I suspect hours :p)

[lilithilien.insanejournal.com]

Good god, woman, get out of my brain!!!! It's that knee that mesmerises me too -- it makes that scene so real.

*notes that it's the same knee that Deniz sleepily strokes in their last couch encounter*

*notes that she really must get a life*

[aldiara.livejournal.com (from insanejournal.com)]

Argh, I was thinking the same thing about the sleepy knee-petting!! Clearly we are both in need of lives, and possibly attached at the brain, lol.

I love the way they put their entire bodies into the physical scenes, it makes it all so jaw-droppingly real. Many actors would do okay with the kissing but just sort of hold each other stiffly by the elbows or touch each other's faces but keep the bodies firmly apart, and then you can just tell that it's acted, even if it's *well* acted. These guys just come across like two people who actually legitimately want to touch each other, like, ALL THE DAMN TIME! It's those small things like the entwined legs and the arching and groping and stuff that makes it so authentic, and also effing hot *fans self*

[lilithilien.insanejournal.com]

These guys just come across like two people who actually legitimately want to touch each other, like, ALL THE DAMN TIME!

Absolutely. And that's why what Dennis G. said about Deniz' motivations does not ring true to me. Someone inspired by guilt does not touch so freely and generously. Both actors put their all into these selling this relationship, and it shows.

[omarandjohnny.insanejournal.com]

Soooo lovely, darling!!!

[lilithilien.insanejournal.com]

Thank you so much!

[sdk]

*dreamy sigh*

A red sheet threaded through his legs like Christmas ribbon...
This. Such a perfect way to paint a picture. You're such a visual writer and it always seems you have the perfect turn of phrase to snap that picture into place. I would be seething with jealousy if I didn't like you so much!

The Bunny Stardust icon didn't quite seem appropriate for this so I had to go with another source for now!

[lilithilien.insanejournal.com]

*blushes* Thank you so much! I started the whole thing with that image, and I knew the sheets had to be red. The rest just grew around it. I'm so glad that you liked it!

And I never mind Erwann & Ismael showing up on my journal. Is there fic about them? There should be.

[sdk]

Hmmm, I have no seen fic, but you're right, there should be. It might be more likely to find in French though and unfortunately my French is not that great.

And btw, I'm probably going to raid yours and Rachie's icons. JFYI. ;)

*eyes the one above*

[lilithilien.insanejournal.com]

Mine all came from Rachie (and you), so help yourself!