Eeeee! First of all, there's hints of smut and yes yes yes (excuse flailing incoherence over here). And I love love love that you have Deniz bending over--and the rimming--hints of rimming and Roman is a screamer, yes! *flails more*
And secondly I just have to second Aldi here in that I love that 'making out' annoys Deniz, but that he doesn't know what else to call it--it's very much new to him completely (and that he's going to ask Roman--adorable! But of course Roman will distract him...heheehehe).
And how much do I love the little detail that when they're having sex, it's to the background of Lena and Annette and Ingo because that's so real vs the romantic making love notions.
Excuse me, I'll be over here imagining the rimming now...
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And secondly I just have to second Aldi here in that I love that 'making out' annoys Deniz, but that he doesn't know what else to call it--it's very much new to him completely (and that he's going to ask Roman--adorable! But of course Roman will distract him...heheehehe).
And how much do I love the little detail that when they're having sex, it's to the background of Lena and Annette and Ingo because that's so real vs the romantic making love notions.
Excuse me, I'll be over here imagining the rimming now...