Thank you so much for commenting! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it!

The beginning, Harry's obsession with Ginny and happy family, disturbed me a bit...

I wonder if you've seen the film this is based on then? That obsession with the girlfriend/family is lifted straight from there -- in fact, I toned it down quite a bit. ;) I had to leave room for the Lassie talk, after all, which was just a few lines in the movie. It was a lot of fun giving it the wizarding treatment.