YAY! Guh is a quite satisfactory response! I'm so happy that you liked it. I always fear I'm including too many details -- I'm glad that it worked for you!!

(I know it! I'm not either! Really! Just the things they say to each other, it's just ... Colin really did go into a dark cave because Bradley told him to, and Bradley really did follow him in to make funny noises, and I just can't help myself ... *flails*)