OH BOYS YOU LOVE EACH OTHER! NOW KISS AND MAKE-UP, KAY????
(Actually don't...not yet, because I want more story to roll around in before it's over.)
Ladies, you've done it again! *LOVES* This is like--this is what should have happened! (Stupid show--remind me why they haven't hired you both on yet?) I could see the whole thing so clearly like it was a scene from an episode you were fictionalizing--the tension with sharing the ice--the trying not to look at each other, but the stiff recognition, where they don't even need to look to know that the other is there. It still kills me that they both misunderstand each other so completely because of bitterness and their wretched past, but it's so perfect because I know that when they finally come together (because--erm, yes, they will, right??) it will be fucking earned and I love it.
THE RED-HAIRED CURLY BOY WAS SO HITTING ON ROMAN? Y/Y? Or will? Or is crushing on him? Yes? XD Deniz will get a taste of his own medicine?
(Actually I hate it when someone reviews a WIP and says "You're gonna do this, right?" or "Please make x do x" so erm...I'm not saying that! Because I want the story that you come up with and not my own wibbly flailings so just chalk this up to me squeeing while 'watching the show' k?)
All of it is awesome. Everyone's voices are so spot on--not just Deniz and Roman's (which you know I think you guys are the experts on completely) but Ingo and asshole!Mike and Vanessa...seriously, I feel like I'm watching the show. A better version of the show. THE VERSION, OKAY? This is canon now. *nods*
I'm pretty much just flailing--it's all so beautifully written! I'm in fic heaven!
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(Actually don't...not yet, because I want more story to roll around in before it's over.)
Ladies, you've done it again! *LOVES* This is like--this is what should have happened! (Stupid show--remind me why they haven't hired you both on yet?) I could see the whole thing so clearly like it was a scene from an episode you were fictionalizing--the tension with sharing the ice--the trying not to look at each other, but the stiff recognition, where they don't even need to look to know that the other is there. It still kills me that they both misunderstand each other so completely because of bitterness and their wretched past, but it's so perfect because I know that when they finally come together (because--erm, yes, they will, right??) it will be fucking earned and I love it.
THE RED-HAIRED CURLY BOY WAS SO HITTING ON ROMAN? Y/Y? Or will? Or is crushing on him? Yes? XD Deniz will get a taste of his own medicine?
(Actually I hate it when someone reviews a WIP and says "You're gonna do this, right?" or "Please make x do x" so erm...I'm not saying that! Because I want the story that you come up with and not my own wibbly flailings so just chalk this up to me squeeing while 'watching the show' k?)
All of it is awesome. Everyone's voices are so spot on--not just Deniz and Roman's (which you know I think you guys are the experts on completely) but Ingo and asshole!Mike and Vanessa...seriously, I feel like I'm watching the show. A better version of the show. THE VERSION, OKAY? This is canon now. *nods*
I'm pretty much just flailing--it's all so beautifully written! I'm in fic heaven!
*HUGGLES YOU BOTH* I can't wait for more!