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Lilith's Fandom World ([personal profile] lili_pad) wrote2008-11-17 03:19 am

Drabble: Unspoken

Title: Unspoken
Author: Lilith ([insanejournal.com profile] lilithilien)
Fandom & Characters: Alles Was Zählt, Marian Öztürk
Word Count: 100 words
Rating: Gen
Disclaimer: I own absolutely nothing.
A/N: Help! I keep writing Marian! This drabble was inspired by and follows the exchange at the end of this clip, when Marian bans Roman from No. 7.


"Fuck!"

It'd been ages since he'd shattered a glass, but Marian hadn't forgotten the coppery tint of dishwater mixed with blood. Nadja rushed over, but he ignored her. She'd be sympathetic until she realised he blamed Roman.

And why shouldn't he?

"Roman, bitte."

His son siding with him over his lover should have been cause to rejoice -- such was tradition. But then he'd seen it, Deniz's silent rejoinder. "Bitte." Like they already spoke a language their own, unheeding of anyone else, soothing each other when no one else dared.

The bloody water spun down the drain, the battle lost.
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[personal profile] sdk 2008-11-17 03:21 am (UTC)(link)
Oh Marian! It's not a contest, honey.

I love how you describe that moment too, because it does look like Deniz is siding with his father until you see the connection between him and Roman.

Like they already spoke a language their own, unheeding of anyone else, soothing each other when no one else dared.

*happy sigh*

Lovely drabble, hon!
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[identity profile] aldiara.insanejournal.com 2008-11-17 04:22 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, gorgeous! I love how perceptive Marian can be (even when he's in denial) and you've captured that so beautifully here.

The process of him coming around was one of the things the show's done really well, and this adds a lovely nuance to that scene.

His son siding with him over his lover should have been cause to rejoice -- such was tradition. But then he'd seen it, Deniz's silent rejoinder. "Bitte." Like they already spoke a language their own, unheeding of anyone else, soothing each other when no one else dared.

Yessss. So lovely. *hearts all over it* By all means, keep writing Marian! :D