ext_311966 ([identity profile] _silverleaf_.insanejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lili_pad 2008-09-09 08:04 pm (UTC)

This is a great piece, I'm quite stunned actually. It's a simple set up (no offense! I like it), and yet you manage to turn it into something really poignant. Fantastic! The sadness, the magic between them that makes Draco's grey world explode into vibrant colour, the longing all around the hotness (srsly, where did you learn that). Love it. Daaaamn. I just want to clarify how extremely hot it was, but then I feel cheap because it seems there's more to it..! Or maybe I'm just overanalyzizing, it's known to happen. x) Ok, rambling now.

Going to bed now, feeling a bit sad yet slightly hopeful. First thing I'll do tomorrow? Snoop around to see if you've written more. ;) Thank you for this!

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