Wow..... Where did you learn how to write?? Because that was just.... amazing. Your phrases, the descriptions you used, the pacing... everything was so perfect. I showed it to one of my betas and she said that, after reading this, she felt like she should give up trying to write because she could never approach this level, and I don't think my work could either, honestly, but I do want to try so I am dying to know where/how you learned to write such delicious prose. See, I can't even express properly how amazed I am in words. If you were a teacher, I'd take courses from you. Or is it something that just comes naturally for you, like breathing?

Whatever the cause for your sublime pose, keep writing more!