His accent was posh, the vowels lazy and slow to leave his titled tongue,

Are you fuckin' kidding me? What a beautiful description!

the skip in his Adam's apple when he swallowed.

And Another one!

those long Patrician fingers looking far too cultured to be wrapped around Jack's crude width.

And I'll be damned if that ain't yet another still!

and I love the ending of this chappy, too!

brava!