This is an incredibly beautiful story. I love how you wove in the elements' imagery with the four different moments in Draco's life. It never felt forced, but always perfectly right. I admire the originality of your imagery - fire, earth, air, and water very easy can be "written" as cliches, but you never do that. The part in Toledo I found particularly vivid - I wish Draco would still answer to Harry's letter, still the ending made me feel that he at least had found his place in life. Thank you so much for writing this! It was my Easter present ;-):