ext_67136 ([identity profile] lotrwariorgodss.insanejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lili_pad 2008-03-16 10:52 pm (UTC)

Beautiful work. I felt lost in Draco's melancholy in that last segment, and I thought the mood of each part fit the corresponding element very well. The inconclusive ending seemed to fit the story as well, even though there's no doubt we'd all have loved to see them back together. Lovely job!

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